Your Personal Storytelling Coach (Powered by AI)
Introduction
You’ve captured a story-worthy moment. You know there’s something powerful there—a realization, a turning point, a moment that matters.
But when you try to tell it, something’s off. The pacing drags. The stakes aren’t clear. The ending falls flat.
You need feedback. But hiring a storytelling coach is expensive. Workshopping with a group takes time you don’t have. And asking friends often gets you “that’s great!” when you know it needs work.
What if you could get expert feedback instantly—feedback based on the exact frameworks used by master storytellers like Matthew Dicks, Kindra Hall, and Philipp Humm?
That’s exactly what AI Feedback at StoryCoach does.
The Problem with Learning Storytelling Alone
Most people know their stories need improvement. They just don’t know how to improve them.
Should you start with the action or the reflection? Is there too much setup? Does the ending land with impact? Are you showing or just telling?
Without guidance, you’re guessing. You revise blindly, hoping something clicks.
Professional storytellers have coaches, writing groups, and years of stage time to refine their craft. They’ve internalized frameworks like the Hero’s Journey, the Five-Second Moment, and Stakes-Struggle-Resolution.
But what if you could access that same expertise—without the cost, without the wait, and exactly when you need it?
How AI Feedback Works
At StoryCoach, we’ve trained our AI on the proven frameworks and techniques of master storytellers. When you submit a story for feedback, the AI analyzes it through multiple lenses:
Structure: Does your story have a clear beginning, middle, and end? Is there a five-second moment where everything changed?
Stakes: What’s at risk? Why does this moment matter? Can the audience feel the tension?
Transformation: What changed? How are you different because of this experience?
Delivery: Is your pacing effective? Are you showing emotion or just describing it? Does your ending resonate?
The result? Specific, actionable feedback that helps you see what’s working and what needs refinement—just like a personal coach would provide.
But here’s the key difference: You’re still in control. The AI doesn’t rewrite your story. It doesn’t strip away your voice. It simply points out what the masters would notice and suggests how to strengthen your narrative.
From Good to Great: Real Examples
Let’s look at how AI Feedback transforms stories:
Before Feedback:
“I gave a presentation at work today. I was really nervous but it went well. Everyone seemed to like it and my boss said good job afterward.”
AI Feedback Highlights:
- Missing the five-second moment: What specific moment changed everything?
- Stakes aren’t clear: Why did this presentation matter to you?
- Ending lacks transformation: How are you different now?
After Refinement:
“My hands were shaking as I clicked to the first slide. Six months of work came down to this 10-minute pitch. Halfway through, I lost my place. Complete blank. The room went silent. Then I looked up and said, ‘You know what? Let me just tell you why this matters.’ I closed the laptop and spoke from the heart. When I finished, my boss didn’t just say ‘good job.’ She said, ‘That’s the most honest presentation I’ve seen here.’ I realized I’d been hiding behind slides for years.”
See the difference? The AI helped identify what was missing—the specific moment of vulnerability, the genuine stakes, and the transformation that makes the story memorable.
The Best of Both Worlds
Here’s what makes AI Feedback at StoryCoach unique: It combines the wisdom of master storytellers with the convenience of instant access.
You don’t need to wait for a workshop. You don’t need to pay hundreds per hour for coaching. You don’t need to hope your friends will give you honest feedback.
You write your story. You request feedback. Within moments, you get specific insights based on proven frameworks—insights that help you see your story through the eyes of the masters.
Then you refine. You rewrite. You strengthen.
And when you’re ready, you can request feedback again. Iterate until your story goes from good to great.
It’s like having Matthew Dicks, Kindra Hall, and Philipp Humm in your corner—available 24/7, whenever inspiration strikes.
Your Stories Deserve Expert Guidance
You have powerful stories inside you. Moments that matter. Experiences that shaped you. Insights worth sharing.
But raw moments aren’t polished stories. They need structure. They need stakes. They need refinement.
That’s where AI Feedback comes in—not to replace your voice, but to help you find it. Not to write your story for you, but to show you how to make it stronger.
Because the difference between a forgettable story and an unforgettable one often comes down to one thing: expert guidance at the right moment.
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